Writing on one of my favourite websites, Peter Forbes says that North Yorkshire poet Simon Armitage‘s first book Zoom (1989) ‘had the freshness of pub talk, a comedian’s sense of timing, but more than that, a brilliant use of poetic rhythm, piling up effects towards comic climax or dramatic denouement. Armitage is aware of the parallel with stand-up comedy and even has a poem ‘I Say I Say’, which is a bleak parody of a stand-up routine ‘I say, I say, has anyone ever topped themselves for a laugh…” Forbes goes on: ‘He can cut it with stand-up performance poets, is good on pop radio chat shows and has a laddish persona that the urban young instinctively recognise as one of their own. But he is also a subtle stylist and an ambitious, serious artist.’
All of this was on display Friday night at the Ottawa International Writers Festival, where Armitage started his section of the evening with a deadpan reading of a very amusing poem about a whale, and ended it, during the Q and As, using the word ‘luxury’ to define how he produces poetry: and here I paraphrase: the luxury of following through on daydreams, of thinking consciously, and not, about ideas until words show up and once they do, of early drafts, and how initially many words simply serve a sacrificial, space/rhythm filling purpose until the right ones arrive, twenty drafts along, and how often, none from draft one appear in draft twenty.
Speaking of the luxury of translating Sir Gawain and the Green Knight (Faber 2007, Anansi in Canada), Armitage referred to the poet’s trinity of anxieties: 1)the title, 2) the first and 3) the last lines, and how, being already told in this poem, he could concentrate worry-free on the moment to moment poetics required to do justice to the narrative. He said he was seized with the notion, and then conviction, that he had to do this project, and spoke beautifully of how working on it was like picking up an unfinished scarf, knitting a few lines, then putting it back down again, and of how he missed doing this now that the job was complete. Other lines/items worth mentioning: good poetry: ‘when you know you’ve outreached yourself; when you produce something you didn’t think you were able to produce; when you make something that wasn’t conceived of originally.’ Armitage is currently working with one of my favourite artists, Andy Goldworthy, on a project in Yorkshire. ‘I come from the generation (Thatcher years) that voted on the losing side the first three times.’